Nice one, Peter. "haggard Home-thirst in my heart"—yes indeed, I can certainly relate to that! What made you interested in working with Rhyme Royal? (I tend to like the form a little better than the Spencerian stuff.)
Cheers, James! I love the number seven, of course, the rhyming pattern feels quite natural to me and iambic pentameter is something of a comfortable middle-ground (tetrameter requiring more concision and hexameter feeling far heavier). But, perhaps primarily, I like that I can get a stanza down in a spare fifteen or twenty minutes. Also, I believe I once read a note you posted about the Rhyme Royal being a good size for a complete thought without the embellishment that might be required for a sonnet (I'm sure I've butchered your words, but I remember quite agreeing with your point).
Nice one, Peter. "haggard Home-thirst in my heart"—yes indeed, I can certainly relate to that! What made you interested in working with Rhyme Royal? (I tend to like the form a little better than the Spencerian stuff.)
Cheers, James! I love the number seven, of course, the rhyming pattern feels quite natural to me and iambic pentameter is something of a comfortable middle-ground (tetrameter requiring more concision and hexameter feeling far heavier). But, perhaps primarily, I like that I can get a stanza down in a spare fifteen or twenty minutes. Also, I believe I once read a note you posted about the Rhyme Royal being a good size for a complete thought without the embellishment that might be required for a sonnet (I'm sure I've butchered your words, but I remember quite agreeing with your point).
No, you got it! I just don't see it used all that much generally, so I was curious why it appealed to you, too. Glad I'm not the only one!
Great lines. The whole poem is very fine, filled with longing. Well rhymed. Thank you
Much appreciated, Katie. I'm very glad you enjoyed it.
I have a haggard Home-thirst in my heart,
Which hurts at times with joy that's worse than fear,